Diagonal Industry
Diagonal Industry
Photography \ Technology | 05/01/06 @386 |
MrBlue |
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In economic theory there existvertical and horizontal industries.
Why not try a diagonal one this time?
Experimental (out of the cam) shift).
HDR of 3 RAWs.
f/16
28mm
ISO 100
I softened the sky to reduce some
grain that came up during tonemapping
and would be happy about C&C
wether you think it's too soft or
ok.
Thanks!
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05/01/06 @394
Like to see you have a good sense of humour as well as talent in your craft.
As for the softened sky, for me it's perfect
Maridol
Edit May 2nd: I just had to come back. There was something that I forgot to mention. The light on the lower part of the border, maybe it will look better if that wasn't there so the effect of having the soft smokey upper part against the crisp elements of the other half will be more pronounced. Sorry for the edit Dominik
05/01/06 @399
Ok, i get the idea but i think the pic might work better if this particular economy wasn't quite so acutely diagonal....
Maybe a gentler angle would help - perhaps if you kept the position top right and swung the image anticlockwise so that the buildings were say 2/3 up the side. That would still give the slope but increase the foreground.
Load of other options to play with too - i just feel the 50/50 split of the canvass is a bit flattening.
Colours and sharpness of the foreground make a great contrast to the 'blurry' sky
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The tilting does not bother me.......but I think the "yellow" part is a little distracting....and I wish the car wouldn`t be there........too much to ask!!!
I would crop some at the right at look for a square format..
As usual excellent quality!!....
Carlos
05/01/06 @813
The tilt does not bother me.
I really prefer the background part with the smoke and those shiny white lighted buildings. The foreground with the car and those yellow building is less strong.
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+10
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